Legal Project Lead produces second draft - Revision history

Aurelia Schultz at 21:47, 28 September 2011

2011-09-28T21:47:28Z

CCID-diane peters: /* Revision and explanation */

2011-09-28T19:48:02Z

‎Revision and explanation

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2011-09-28T19:47:25Z

‎Revision and explanation

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2011-09-28T16:35:15Z

‎Revision and explanation

Aurelia Schultz at 16:34, 28 September 2011

2011-09-28T16:34:19Z

Michelle Thorne: New page: Back to Worldwide Overview >> Step VI. Public discussion Suggested Timeframe: two weeks =Revision and explanation= Once the Project Leads agree that enough time in the pu...

2007-11-12T12:08:15Z

New page: Back to Worldwide Overview >> Step VI. Public discussion <b>Suggested Timeframe:</b> two weeks =Revision and explanation= Once the Project Leads agree that enough time in the pu...

New page

Back to [[Worldwide Overview]] >> Step VI. [[Public discussion]]

<b>Suggested Timeframe:</b> two weeks

=Revision and explanation=

Once the Project Leads agree that enough time in the public discussion has elapsed, then they can begin to work on a second draft. This draft should be a revision based on comments gained in the public discussion.

When the second draft is finalized, we kindly ask for another English re-translation of the draft, and please point out and explain the changes that have been made.

If any interesting and relevant material has surfaced during the public discussion that you would like to share, we encourage you to forward the information to us so that we can inform the CC community. Examples of relevant material include:

* a brief history of copyright law and intellectual property rights in your jurisdiction
* outline and links to major legislation and international treaties that affect copyright and IP rights in your jurisdiction
* how Creative Commons fits into the current legislation
* changes that were made to the licenses to accommodate local legislation and policy

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Next: Step VIII. [[CCi reviews second draft]]

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 When this next draft is finalized, we kindly ask for another English re-translation of the draft (if necessary), and that the Legal Lead please point out and explain the changes that have been made.
-If any interesting and relevant material has surfaced during the public discussion that you would like to share, please complete a public discussion report [insert link]. Examples of relevant material include:
+If any interesting and relevant material has surfaced during the public discussion that you would like to share, please complete a [[media:Public Discussion Report Template.ods|public discussion report]]. Examples of relevant material include:
 * a brief history of copyright law and intellectual property rights in your jurisdiction

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 Once the Project Leads agree that enough time in the public discussion has elapsed, then they can begin to work on a next draft. This draft should be a revision based on comments gained in the public discussion.
-When the second draft is finalized, we kindly ask for another English re-translation of the draft (if necessary), and please point out and explain the changes that have been made.
+When this next draft is finalized, we kindly ask for another English re-translation of the draft (if necessary), and that the Legal Lead please point out and explain the changes that have been made.
 If any interesting and relevant material has surfaced during the public discussion that you would like to share, please complete a public discussion report [insert link]. Examples of relevant material include:
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-Next: Step VIII. [[CCi reviews second draft]]
+Next: Step VIII. [[CC reviews second draft]]

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 * outline and links to major legislation and international treaties that affect copyright and IP rights in your jurisdiction
 * how Creative Commons fits into the current legislation
-* changes that were made to the licenses to accommodate local legislation and policy
+* changes that were made to the licenses to accommodate relevant law and policy
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 Next: Step VIII. [[CCi reviews second draft]]

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 =Revision and explanation=
-Once the Project Leads agree that enough time in the public discussion has elapsed, then they can begin to work on a second draft. This draft should be a revision based on comments gained in the public discussion.
+Once the Project Leads agree that enough time in the public discussion has elapsed, then they can begin to work on a next draft. This draft should be a revision based on comments gained in the public discussion.
-When the second draft is finalized, we kindly ask for another English re-translation of the draft, and please point out and explain the changes that have been made.
+When the second draft is finalized, we kindly ask for another English re-translation of the draft (if necessary), and please point out and explain the changes that have been made.
-If any interesting and relevant material has surfaced during the public discussion that you would like to share, we encourage you to forward the information to us so that we can inform the CC community. Examples of relevant material include:
+If any interesting and relevant material has surfaced during the public discussion that you would like to share, please complete a public discussion report [insert link]. Examples of relevant material include:
 * a brief history of copyright law and intellectual property rights in your jurisdiction