4.0/Draft 4 - Revision history

Kat Walsh: archive infobox

2013-12-09T21:35:12Z

archive infobox

Kat Walsh: /* Welcome to the Public Discussion of 4.0d4 */ proper links

2013-12-09T21:33:33Z

‎Welcome to the Public Discussion of 4.0d4: proper links

CCID-diane peters: /* Updated Draft 4 Legal Code */

2013-10-15T18:02:26Z

‎Updated Draft 4 Legal Code

CCID-diane peters: /* Updated Draft 4 Legal Code */

2013-10-15T17:57:03Z

‎Updated Draft 4 Legal Code

CCID-diane peters: /* Legal Code: Topics for Feedback */

2013-10-15T17:28:40Z

‎Legal Code: Topics for Feedback

CCID-diane peters: /* Welcome to the Public Discussion of 4.0d4 */

2013-10-10T21:40:34Z

‎Welcome to the Public Discussion of 4.0d4

CCID-diane peters: /* Welcome to the Public Discussion of 4.0d4 */

2013-10-10T21:35:09Z

‎Welcome to the Public Discussion of 4.0d4

Kat Walsh: /* Legal Code: Topics for Feedback */ Media: link for chart

2013-09-12T00:31:27Z

‎Legal Code: Topics for Feedback: [[Media:]] link for chart

Kat Walsh: /* Policy and Drafting Decisions */ link comparison d3-d4

2013-09-12T00:30:01Z

‎Policy and Drafting Decisions: link comparison d3-d4

Kat Walsh: /* Legal Code: Topics for Feedback */ comparison chart link

2013-09-11T23:09:34Z

‎Legal Code: Topics for Feedback: comparison chart link

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		+	{{Infobox\|'''4.0 has now been published; this page is maintained as an archive of past discussion.'''}}
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	==Welcome to the Public Discussion of 4.0d4==		==Welcome to the Public Discussion of 4.0d4==
	(view and download the [[4.0/Drafts#Draft_4_Details\|4.0d4 licenses]])		(view and download the [[4.0/Drafts#Draft_4_Details\|4.0d4 licenses]])

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 During this fourth and final phase of the 4.0 development cycle, we will limit the consultation to reviewing a few remaining policy decisions that resulted in changes to the licenses from prior drafts.
-'''Note:'''  Creative Commons introduced revisions to draft 4 subsequent to publication.  You can download and view the 4.0 licenses displaying all cumulative changes as of 10 October 2013 on our Drafts page here [link], as well as view a summary of the main changes [link].
+'''Note:'''  Creative Commons introduced revisions to draft 4 subsequent to publication.  You can download and view the 4.0 licenses displaying all cumulative changes as of 10 October 2013 on our [[4.0/Drafts#4.0d4v2_Licenses_.28updated_as_of_15_October_2013.29|Drafts]] page, as well as view a [[#Updated_Draft_4_Legal_Code|summary of the main changes]].
 ===Treatment of issues and proposals in 4.0d4===

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 On 15 October 2013, we posted updated legal code for all six licenses on the staging server.  We incorporated changes based on the feedback received on draft 4 as of that date.  Here are the main revisions:
-.  Revised the definition of Licensed Rights as follows (new language in bold, removed language strikethrough):
+.  Revised the definition of Licensed Rights to delete "which includes" and to insert "which are limited to":
-:: Licensed Rights means the rights granted to You subject to the terms and conditions of this Public License, which includes are limited to all Copyright and Similar Rights that apply to Your use of the Licensed Material and that the Licensor has authority to license.
+:: Licensed Rights means the rights granted to You subject to the terms and conditions of this Public License, which are limited to all Copyright and Similar Rights that apply to Your use of the Licensed Material and that the Licensor has authority to license.
 .  Split Section 2(a)(5)(A) into two subsections creating 2(a)(5)(A) “Offer from the Licensor – Licensed Material” (which language has not changed), and 2(a)(5)(B) “Additional offer from the Licensor – Adapted Material” where the new SA language is included.

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 ====Updated Draft 4 Legal Code====
 On 15 October 2013, we posted updated legal code for all six licenses on the staging server.  We incorporated changes based on the feedback received on draft 4 as of that date.  Here are the main revisions:
 ====Other Pending Topics====

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	*'''''Attribution and marking''''' In this draft, we have revised the URI requirement to more closely resemble the treatment in 3.0. URIs must be retained if supplied with the licensed material. The requirement to indicate modifications is no longer tied to this requirement; it is now independent. Additionally, indications of prior modifications must be retained, so that downstream users know if the licensed material has been previously modified. Any notice of disclaimer of warranties must also be retained. For a detailed comparison, please view the [[4.0/Attribution and marking\|attribution page]] and the [[Media:Attribution_chart_%28v3_v_d4%29_.pdf\|comparison chart (.pdf)]].		*'''''Attribution and marking''''' In this draft, we have revised the URI requirement to more closely resemble the treatment in 3.0. URIs must be retained if supplied with the licensed material. The requirement to indicate modifications is no longer tied to this requirement; it is now independent. Additionally, indications of prior modifications must be retained, so that downstream users know if the licensed material has been previously modified. Any notice of disclaimer of warranties must also be retained. For a detailed comparison, please view the [[4.0/Attribution and marking\|attribution page]] and the [[Media:Attribution_chart_%28v3_v_d4%29_.pdf\|comparison chart (.pdf)]].
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		+	====Updated Draft 4 Legal Code====
		+	On 15 October 2013, we posted updated legal code for all six licenses on the staging server. We incorporated changes based on the feedback received on draft 4 as of that date. Here are the main revisions:

	====Other Pending Topics====		====Other Pending Topics====

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	During this fourth and final phase of the 4.0 development cycle, we will limit the consultation to reviewing a few remaining policy decisions that resulted in changes to the licenses from prior drafts.		During this fourth and final phase of the 4.0 development cycle, we will limit the consultation to reviewing a few remaining policy decisions that resulted in changes to the licenses from prior drafts.
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		+	Note: Creative Commons introduced revisions to draft 4 subsequent to publication. You can download and view the 4.0 licenses displaying all cumulative changes as of 10 October 2013 on our Drafts page here [link], as well as view a summary of the main changes [link].

	===Treatment of issues and proposals in 4.0d4===		===Treatment of issues and proposals in 4.0d4===

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 *'''''ShareAlike and adaptations.'''''  As part of our ongoing effort to ease complexities associated with license-stacking issue, including compliance challenges for downstream users of adapted material, we have been persuaded to introduce an express provision that allows those downstream users to comply with all obligations to all upstream licensors with reference to the terms and conditions of the Adapter's License.  '''We introduce this change in the ShareAlike licenses only''' -- BY and BY-NC will operate as always.  This is intended to reduce the complexity for reuse when adaptations are created using different versions of ShareAlike or Share-Alike compatible licenses. See the [[4.0/ShareAlike|ShareAlike]] page for further explanation.
-*'''''Attribution and marking''''' In this draft, we have revised the URI requirement to more closely resemble the treatment in 3.0.  URIs must be retained if supplied with the licensed material. The requirement to indicate modifications is no longer tied to this requirement; it is now independent.  Additionally, indications of prior modifications must be retained, so that downstream users know if the licensed material has been previously modified.  Any notice of disclaimer of warranties must also be retained. For a detailed comparison, please view the [[4.0/Attribution and marking|attribution page]] and the [http://wiki.creativecommons.org/images/3/32/Attribution_chart_%28v3_v_d4%29_.pdf comparison chart].
+*'''''Attribution and marking''''' In this draft, we have revised the URI requirement to more closely resemble the treatment in 3.0.  URIs must be retained if supplied with the licensed material. The requirement to indicate modifications is no longer tied to this requirement; it is now independent.  Additionally, indications of prior modifications must be retained, so that downstream users know if the licensed material has been previously modified.  Any notice of disclaimer of warranties must also be retained. For a detailed comparison, please view the [[4.0/Attribution and marking|attribution page]] and the [[Media:Attribution_chart_%28v3_v_d4%29_.pdf|comparison chart (.pdf)]].
 ====Other Pending Topics====

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 ===Policy and Drafting Decisions===
-The third public comment period focused on a small number of remaining issues. It was originally intended to be the final discussion period, but enough changes were incorporated that we concluded a new public draft was warranted before final publication. The conversation focused on issues specifically identified for discussion, which were formally raised during several consultation periods, but also included other issues raised by our global community as they conducted final reviews. Here are highlights from the public discussion and corresponding revisions in the draft 4 legal code.
+The third public comment period focused on a small number of remaining issues. It was originally intended to be the final discussion period, but enough changes were incorporated that we concluded a new public draft was warranted before final publication. The conversation focused on issues specifically identified for discussion, which were formally raised during several consultation periods, but also included other issues raised by our global community as they conducted final reviews.  For a comprehensive and detailed view of changes made in this draft, please see the  [[Media:Comparison_draft_3_to_draft_4.pdf|comparison of draft 3 and draft 4]]. Here are highlights from the public discussion and corresponding revisions in the draft 4 legal code.
 *'''''Internationalization.''''' After feedback from affiliates, we are no longer specifying a default rule for choosing the jurisdiction whose law should apply in case of dispute, as was introduced in draft 3, though recommended interpretive guidelines will be provided outside of the license. More detail is available on the [[4.0/Internationalization|Internationalization]] page.